Friday, September 14, 2007
Paz- Formal Writing #2
Todo el mundo quiere, necesita, y deberia tener la paz. Mucha gente a perdido a familiares y/o amigos por causa de la violencia en el mundo. Creo que la paz no deberia ser impossible. Las guerras y el rencor contra alguien no es necesario. En colombia hay un dia que se celebra la paz. Si hubiera paz no hubieran tantos problemas y el mundo seria seguro, feliz y mucho mejor.
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Name: Raquel
Date: 12/18/07
Before writing, I think of what I know about the topic. I make a list of ideas, words, and phrases I might use.
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I organize my thoughts and ideas so that I can focus on one central idea.
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I choose ideas and examples that are appropriate for this culture.
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I make sure the writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
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I try to make my writing interesting.
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I write a first draft and then I reread and revise.
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I check to make sure that my writing makes sense.
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I make sure the sentences relate to each other.
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I use familiar language structures so I know I am writing correctly.
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If I do not know a word, I use a word or phrase I do know.
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I make sure punctuation is correct according to the rules in this language.
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I check my spelling.
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I check my use of verb tenses (present, past, future, etc.).
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I check my use of gender and agreements (masculine, feminine, neuter).
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I ask someone who knows the language (classmate) to read my writing and give me feedback.
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I make sure the final copy is legible (handwritten or typed).
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