Escribe una carta. Imagina que escribes a la madre de un amigo. Ella trabaja en una carrera que te interesa y te ayudo a conseguir una entrevista para un puesto de verano en el que podrias aprender mucho sobre ese campo. Saluda a ella y:
- dela las gracias por lo que hizo
- cuentale como te fue en la entrevista
- explica que esperas hacer si te dan el puesto
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¡Hola Señora López!
¿Como esta? Gracias a usted yo estoy muy bien.
La entrevista que me ayudo a conseguir salio muy bien. Aprendí mucho más de lo que posiblemente estaré haciendo este verano. Me dijeron lo que esperan de mi y lo que se necesita para conseguir el trabajo. También me explicaron más del trabajo. Fueron muy amables y yo pienso que me van a dar el trabajo porque usted tiene una buena reputación allí y trabaja bien. Dijeron que yo se mucho del trabajo. Espero que me den el trabajo. Me gusta la idea de empezar temprano en algo que me gusta y talvez si me gusta lo suficiente puede ser mi carrera también.
¡Gracias por todo! ¡Hasta luego!
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Writing Rubric: Peer-Assessment
Student Writer: Raquel
Student Reviewer: Chantel
Assignment: Informal Writing #2
Date: 11/27/07
The assignment is legible (written neatly or typed).
5
The central theme of the writing is clear.
5
The writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
5
The assignment is interesting to read.
5
There are enough details and examples to make the ideas understandable.
4
The sentences relate to each other.
5
The ideas are appropriate for the culture.
5
The sentence structures are overall correct and understandable.
5
The writer uses punctuation correctly.
5
The writer has checked spelling so that spelling is overall correct.
5
The writer uses verb tenses correctly.
5
The writer uses correct subject/verb agreements.
5
The writer uses gender agreements correctly.
5
What I really liked about this assignment:
It was very good.
I have the following questions about your assignment:
none
Some suggestions for next time:
none
Writing Rubric: Peer-Assessment
Student Writer: Raquel
Student Reviewer: Anh
Assignment: Informal Writing #2
Date: 12/7/07
The assignment is legible (written neatly or typed).
5
The central theme of the writing is clear.
5
The writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
5
The assignment is interesting to read.
5
There are enough details and examples to make the ideas understandable.
5
The sentences relate to each other.
5
The ideas are appropriate for the culture.
5
The sentence structures are overall correct and understandable.
5
The writer uses punctuation correctly.
5
The writer has checked spelling so that spelling is overall correct.
5
The writer uses verb tenses correctly.
5
The writer uses correct subject/verb agreements.
5
The writer uses gender agreements correctly.
5
What I really liked about this assignment:
It was very good.
I have the following questions about your assignment:
Some suggestions for next time:
Name: Raquel
Date: 12/18/07
Before writing, I think of what I know about the topic. I make a list of ideas, words, and phrases I might use.
yes no
I organize my thoughts and ideas so that I can focus on one central idea.
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I choose ideas and examples that are appropriate for this culture.
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I make sure the writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
yes no
I try to make my writing interesting.
yes no
I write a first draft and then I reread and revise.
yes no
I check to make sure that my writing makes sense.
yes no
I make sure the sentences relate to each other.
yes no
I use familiar language structures so I know I am writing correctly.
yes no
If I do not know a word, I use a word or phrase I do know.
yes no
I make sure punctuation is correct according to the rules in this language.
yes no
I check my spelling.
yes no
I check my use of verb tenses (present, past, future, etc.).
yes no
I check my use of gender and agreements (masculine, feminine, neuter).
yes no
I ask someone who knows the language (classmate) to read my writing and give me feedback.
yes no
I make sure the final copy is legible (handwritten or typed).
yes no
What I think I did very well on in this assignment:
What I think I need to focus/improve on next time:
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