Friday, September 28, 2007
El Ambiente- Formal Writing #3
Los ambientes en todas partes del mundo deberian ser cuidados y estar limpios. En la primera fuente gente de diferentes lugares fueron entrevistadas en lo que piensan de el ambiente en sus comunidades. Algunos de los problemas fueron la contaminacion, el drenaje, los problemas con los carros, la basura y los problemas mariticos y ariales. Yo pienso que deberiamos cuidar nuestros ambientes porque es donde vivimos, es el aire que respiramos y todo seria mucho mejor porque se siente bien cuando todo esta limpio y bonito.
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Writing Rubric: Peer-Assessment
Student Writer: Raquel
Student Reviewer: Chantel
Assignment: Formal Writing #3
Date: 11/27/07
The assignment is legible (written neatly or typed).
5
The central theme of the writing is clear.
5
The writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
5
The assignment is interesting to read.
5
There are enough details and examples to make the ideas understandable.
4
The sentences relate to each other.
5
The ideas are appropriate for the culture.
5
The sentence structures are overall correct and understandable.
5
The writer uses punctuation correctly.
5
The writer has checked spelling so that spelling is overall correct.
5
The writer uses verb tenses correctly.
4
The writer uses correct subject/verb agreements.
5
The writer uses gender agreements correctly.
5
What I really liked about this assignment:
It was very good.
I have the following questions about your assignment:
none
Some suggestions for next time:
Try explaining a little more.
Writing Rubric: Peer-Assessment
Student Writer: Raquel
Student Reviewer: Anh
Assignment: Formal Writing #3
Date: 12/7/07
The assignment is legible (written neatly or typed).
5
The central theme of the writing is clear.
5
The writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
5
The assignment is interesting to read.
5
There are enough details and examples to make the ideas understandable.
4
The sentences relate to each other.
5
The ideas are appropriate for the culture.
5
The sentence structures are overall correct and understandable.
5
The writer uses punctuation correctly.
5
The writer has checked spelling so that spelling is overall correct.
5
The writer uses verb tenses correctly.
4
The writer uses correct subject/verb agreements.
5
The writer uses gender agreements correctly.
5
What I really liked about this assignment:
You wrote it really well.
I have the following questions about your assignment:
Some suggestions for next time:
Name: Raquel
Date: 12/18/07
Before writing, I think of what I know about the topic. I make a list of ideas, words, and phrases I might use.
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I organize my thoughts and ideas so that I can focus on one central idea.
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I choose ideas and examples that are appropriate for this culture.
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I make sure the writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
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I try to make my writing interesting.
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I write a first draft and then I reread and revise.
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I check to make sure that my writing makes sense.
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I make sure the sentences relate to each other.
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I use familiar language structures so I know I am writing correctly.
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If I do not know a word, I use a word or phrase I do know.
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I make sure punctuation is correct according to the rules in this language.
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I check my spelling.
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I check my use of verb tenses (present, past, future, etc.).
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I check my use of gender and agreements (masculine, feminine, neuter).
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I ask someone who knows the language (classmate) to read my writing and give me feedback.
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I make sure the final copy is legible (handwritten or typed).
yes no
What I think I did very well on in this assignment:
What I think I need to focus/improve on next time:
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